I started this one with a serious tone, but it wasn’t fun – it felt like being absorbed in a problem, without being able to observe it. So I made a new version with a lighter (nonchalant?) touch. I also added a company, because I thought the protagonist can’t be alone in his struggle. Which version do you like better?
๊ทธ๋ฆผ์ ์์ํ ๋๋ ์ฌ๊ฐํ ๋ถ์๊ธฐ๋ก ์ก์๋๋ฐ, ์ฌ๋ฏธ๊ฐ ์์๋ค. ๋ฌธ์ ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ๋ผ๋ณด๊ธฐ๋ณด๋ค ๋ฌธ์ ์ ํ๋ฌปํ๋ ๊ฒ ๊ฐ์๊ธฐ ๋๋ฌธ์ด๋ค. ๊ทธ๋์ ๋ ๊ฐ๋ณ๊ณ ์ด์ฉ๋ฉด ๋ฌด์ฌํ ๋ฏํ ๋ถ์๊ธฐ๋ก ๊ทธ๋ ค๋ณด์๋ค. ์ฃผ์ธ๊ณต ํผ์์ ๊ฒช๋ ๋ฌธ์ ๋ ์๋ ๊ฒ ๊ฐ์์, ์ฌ๋๋ ํ๋ ๋ ๋ฃ์๋ค. ์ด๋ ๋ฒ์ ์ด ๋ ์ข์ผ์ ์ง ๊ถ๊ธํ๋ค.